Writing Wednesday: Shark Poem

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That is an wonderful poem, did you study about sharks or something?

Posted by Anna  on  06/01  at  12:16 AM

Cool

Mack
Texas

Posted by Mack  on  07/27  at  08:59 PM

what a strang kind of pig! smile

aki

Posted by aki  on  09/12  at  12:31 PM

cool shark !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jack
ct

Posted by jack  on  09/12  at  12:34 PM

Sharks
I would see rows and rows of teeth big strong teeth as strong as a tree. It feels sharp and dangerous. It will scare me so much.

Jason
MA

Posted by Jason  on  11/20  at  02:42 PM

Our class read this poem this morning.  One student thinks it MUST be a “he” looking in the shark’s mouth because “girls don’t like stinky stuff”! Love the way he supported his thinking. Most of us think that someone got eaten at the end.  This was surprising to many in our class.  We thought it was just going to tell us about shark’s teeth.  This was a fun poem to read.
Thanks for sharing it!

Mrs. Balisterri’s First Grade Class
Hill Farm Elementary
Bryant, Arkansas smile

Posted by Logged Out User  on  09/17  at  10:48 AM

After reading the poem, our class answered the questions on our marker boards.  We think it sounds like someone gets eaten at the end of the poem.  Some of us thought this was sad but some of us thought it was a funny way for the author to finish the poem.  We were wondering.  Mr. Simon, were you the one looking inside the shark’s mouth??  We hope not because we sure do love Writing Wednesday!
Thanks for sharing with us!

Mrs. Akers’ First Grade Class
Hill Farm Elementary
Bryant, Arkansas smile

Posted by Logged Out User  on  09/17  at  02:28 PM

Dear Mr. simon

Hi Mr. Simon, I think the poem was really funny I could tell that the person’s head was bitten off
   
                                  sincerely a Cedarmere student

      BTW: you’re visiting our school tommorow ,see you there

Mostafa
Maryland

Posted by mostafa  on  09/30  at  09:47 PM
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